Welcome to my weekly series, Designing from Bones, where we use archaeology, mythology and the artifacts of human history to find and design stories. Join me today as we track down three groups of evil little people and the stories they provide us.
Welcome, friends, to the Zoo Arcane. Follow closely as we step through the misty portal to visit three species of malicious dwarves from Africa and Southeast Asia. Please note that the Zoo Arcane is not responsible for missing items, pets, children or appendages.
Tikoloshe: the dwarf of retribution
A common legend of the Bantu (referring to about a third of native Africans, including the Zulu tribes) speaks of an evil furry dwarf known as a Tikoloshe. Generally called upon by shamans to harass, injure and slay enemies, the Tikoloshe is a dangerous pet. They are called to life from the corpses of the dead, preferably those that have died due to acts violence and live to spread mischief and mayhem amongst the living.
Tikoloshe have hard thickened skin and eyeless sockets yet can see trouble brewing miles away. They sometimes take on different forms, such as a bear or other tough furry animal.
Other stories of this malevolent munchkin speak of its love for pestering schoolchildren on their way to and from school (which preempts the old adage: “the dog ate my lunch”).
In a YA tale our hero could mock an old man (shaman) who unleashes his pet Tikoloshe to exact retribution for the slight. First on the way to school but eventually in the classroom. Imagine the mayhem were one to appear at a sporting event or on the playground at lunch.
The Tikoloshe is born to generate horror, wearing down its victim until either the target of ire or the hunting dwarf must die. Imagine this happening in a small town with the Tikoloshe driving the hero to react in ways that make him appear insane. Distancing him, until finally attempting to claim revenge that will appear as suicide to the other townsfolk.
Put in these ear plugs friends and hold your totems close. Our next visit is to a creature that both abhors the living and loves to lead them to their graves.
Eloko: bell-ringer, flesh eater
The Mongo tribes of DR Congo and Zaire whisper of evil little people called the Eloko that haunt the local forests waiting to unleash havok against the living. Deep within the forests the Eloko guard the bountiful food supplies more zealously then a merchant his gold. Hunters venturing off the path in search of the plentiful variety of fruit and meat must carry tokens of power to survive for the creature can open its mouth wide enough to swallow an adult human whole.
Dressing in fallen leaves and using the hollows of trees as condo’s the Eloko grows grass in place of hair adding to its bizarre appearance and allowing it to easily blend with its environment. The Eloko use tiny bells to entice and trap those that enter into their realm, casting a siren bemusement on the hearer and luring them to their doom. They feed on humans the way we would on cattle and are especially good at charming females with their piercing gaze and tinkling bells.
Imagine a fantasy heroine or sci-fi explorer and her party stumbling onto a village or planet of Eloko. Unprepared and unaware they would at first seem to be harmless primitives. Yet, after an ally or two have been consumed in single swallows, the fight for survival would be on. The sweet ringing of small bells causing spines to chill
Choosing a heroine over a hero raises the stakes and tension as it is revealed that the Eloko have a greater power of charm over women.
As we once more pass through the misty portal to the splendid islands of the Philippines be sure to walk closely in my footsteps for there are things where we now travel that do not like to be disturbed by the wanderings of mankind.
Nuno: King of the Anthill
The people of the Philippines speak of an evil bearded dwarf, the Nuno, that lives in and near anthills. The Nuno retaliates against anyone that disturbs their environment (such as urinating on the ground) or damages their chosen anthill. The Nuno can spit on an offender causing the area touched to swell, bleed and at times infecting the person with fits of vomiting that includes the expulsion of a dark fluid from the mouth.
Children are often cautioned to be careful in areas inhabited by the Nuno (which interestingly corresponds to rises and falls in the red ant population and the love of children to play in untamed fields).
Killing a Nuno will free anyone affected by its curse. With an attraction to large female mammals the Nuno can be baited into revealing itself and is easily killed by pinching its head with the fingers of one hand, however, should its family and friends discover the humans treachery they in turn will hunt the Nuno-killers. Ah, the vicious cycle of demented nature.
Imagine a quiet day in a new suburban development. Children wander through the undeveloped woods nearby and enter a small opening dominated by a conical anthill. Being children they poke it with sticks until one boy (and you know there is always one) kicks the mound, slipping and falling onto it. The ants swarm over the boy as a small dwarf surprises the children, spitting on them and screeching as they turn and flee. First the boy that kicked the mound becomes deathly ill, coughing dark phlegm from his lungs. Other children display rashes that seem to eat away at skin and flesh. How will the parents respond? Or will it be up to the children to re-enter the woods in order to bait and kill the Nuno and free themselves from the curse?
And now my friends I return you to your own place and time. If you see something small scurrying about in the shadows, or witness the soft chime of bells in the distance, step away quickly and quietly and let your written words become your witness of things best left unseen.
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I am SO staying out of the woods.
Thanks for another fantastic post. I love Zoo Arcane!
Nice post! Many South Africans are still terrified of the tokoloshe, and many folk sleep with their beds on bricks (to raise the bed and protect them from the short little thing).
I always love these stories, ROWbro. Especially like the anthill kicker (every neighborhood has one of those kids). ~clink~
Awesome as always. I’ll spend the rest of the day looking over my shoulder and under bushes.
Miniature demons=big troubles. Reading this was like reading a one minute horror story!
Thanks for sharing!
Wow, fascinating! I think my favorite is Eloko with the bells. You could write some really creepy scenes about people hearing the bells and not knowing what’s going on…
Ha! Fantastic post! This is one of my favorite Designing From Bones so far. So many possibilities with these evil little creatures. I love the ideas you used for scary tales for kids. Pretty darn spooky! Thanks so much, Gene.
Where do you find this stuff Gene? Awesome! This one has my imagination running wild…..
I’ve never heard of any of these – fascinating post!
I’m glad you all enjoyed the evil little people, creepy, and there are quite a few I didn’t bring out for this post (takes a while to properly train a ELP so it doesn’t try to bite the guests).
Annalise: Exactly what I was thinking. Like the beating heart in Telltale Heart, only its bells and someone really is out to get you. Fun stuff.
Lynn: I think all of these guys could be toned down for the kid market, although many of the kids I’ve met over the years might love them just as they are (its the parents that tend to think things are too creepy).
Funny how most “fairies” are seen as happy creature who flit about. We forget about the evil ones who cause mischief or worse.
I really wish I hadn’t read this before bed. Now I have to go in there and look underneath it. I better not hear any bells tonight, Lempp!
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Excellent post. I especially liked the idea of keeping the Tikolashe as a pet. I wonder if the shape could be changed or maybe even glamoured into a ferret or a little dog–something that would appear harmless but be a terrible foe. I always get so many weird notions from reading your posts. Thanks for the fun.
Wow, Gene, you’ve got it all here! Dwarves, an early iteration of zombies. Cool.
I’m laughing at Jess because if it wasn’t mid-day where I just cleaned under the beds, I’d be checking too. lol.
Where do you find this stuff, Gene? It’s just fabulous. I think you’ve got a book in the making: “Designing From The Bones: Writing Inspiration for Digging Deeper” or some such!
Catie: Happy to inspire “notions” for you, especially because I know how awesome your thoughts tend to be 🙂
Jen & Jess: LOL, they don’t ONLY hide under beds you know. Some are behind shower curtains, behind the couch when we watch TV, lurking under the sink *grins*
Debra: I rarely do anything with only one purpose in mind. I have several ideas for this series and I’d bet that by mid to late 2012 something will be in motion or done.
Thanks to everyone for the excellent comments. I’m so glad you are all digging this series. I love writing them and have some fun subjects lined up for the coming months. Just want you all to know how much I appreciate your support 🙂
Gene, I’m very happy to hear you’ve got plans for this series! It’s one of my favorites.
Oh man, Gene, that was one of your spookiest, creepiest stories yet! No more hikes in the woods for me! Love the prompts…make me wish I wrote in that genre…maybe I will one day (I save all your Wednesday posts for all the great ideas you offer).
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