Welcome to my weekly series “Designing from Bones”, using archaeology and the artifacts of human history to find and design stories. Last time we delved into the Aurignacian Lion-Man to harvest story ideas revolving around objects, characterizations and cultures. In this post we will take a look at a series of Semaphore Towers built along the western coast of Ireland during the early 1800’s for ideas on how to use historical settings.
The distracting smells of rabbit stew drift up from the lower recesses of a squat stone tower as you stand guard atop, leaning against the corner bartizan. The sun descends, turning wave into fluid fire, your mind half-conscious lulled by swell and ebb. A dark blot encroaches horizons’ flame, then another and another. Ships! Spyglass! Blue flags! The French are coming! In an instant only a single thought remains. Screaming for your compatriots you grab the ropes to the towers semaphore pole and begin to adjust its flags sending out the signal that will be carried all the way to Dublin within hours. “To arms! French fleet approaching Lough Swilly!”
Along the southern and western coasts of Ireland lie the ruins of 81 such semaphore towers commissioned in 1803 by Ireland’s Lord Lieutenant Harwick after two unsuccessful invasions by the French showed a weakness in the islands defenses. While the towers offered no true military defense, the semaphore poles and flags on top of them can be seen for miles, sending word of danger rapidly along the coast to Dublin. Most of these towers have now fallen into disrepair, but their legacy lives on for the alert writer.
Everything has a story to tell. What can we learn from these small defensive structures and the purpose they once held? Let’s explore!
Consider for a moment the power of Tolkien’s hobbit hole. A simple round door set in a hill containing essentially a rabbit warren.
Simple structures used as powerful backdrops.
A few minutes of research brought me full details on the towers as they originally existed, as well as photos, GPS images and the fact that they were modeled after late Medieval tower houses. With this information in hand, writing a descriptive of the tower is an easy matter. Square and simple, the towers can be used as guard stations, the home of a remote farmer or hermit, the meeting place of a cult or secret lovers.
Float one in space and it becomes a difficult to detect watch station warning of incursions by pesky alien neighbors, filled with tension if your hero happens to be on the base when the alien invasion fleet passes by!
Story ideas flow best when a writer wonders about something and then theorizes possibilities.
Did you hear what happened at the tower?
What if a serial killer made one of these remote, and oft overlooked towers his home, turning the cellar into a house macabre? Or perhaps a cult instead? Two agents in a thriller, might see this as a safe place to meet only to be ambushed, or only one is an agent and the other a journalist hunting the truth, unaware of the agents complicity (feel the tension?).
In a romance, the towers transform into a haven for clandestine meetings, leading to a climax where a jilted spouse or betrothed finds his beloved in the arms of his best friend or worst enemy. Building a fantasy, the towers become the remote home of an eccentric hermit magi who holds the key/cure/only hope, but beware or his pet bear, or basilisk, or man-eating bunnies might snack on the hero!
When we consider any location, the possibilities available to us become endless. When viewed through the lens of genre they often show us their greatest value.
Fiber-optics, any time, any place.
In 1803, when the watch towers were built, semaphore signaling was state-of-the-art, the fiber-optics of its day. While there is nothing wrong with using an existing technology to accomplish a story goal, there is also nothing wrong with conceiving new variants to add flavor to an overused trope.
How about a romance where lovers use the color of their handkerchiefs to signal each other? “Ah! Yellow today, noon at the old tower!”
Perhaps a thriller where secret messages are sent through blog headlines, or posts, or comments (don’t analyze this post or black helicopters may visit you! Just kidding…kinda…no really, I am just kidding…).
Spin into fantasy a magical communication where the message is whispered into a sparkling hummingbird or finch that explodes out of existence in a burst of confetti after delivery. Okay that might be a bit comical but still the power of the concept shows through.
Science fiction is famous for using current technologies . . . two thousand years in the future! Sure, variants of some technologies may still be in use, but before simply choosing to upgrade something consider all the possibilities. Is it not possible that the aliens will figure out how to listen in on wireless or even light-based communications?
Clever wins the day in any genre, thrill your readers and they will love you for it.
What comes to mind when you consider the towers? Any ideas on alternate communication? Just the basics, save the full concept for your own story! Give the same seed to a thousand writers and watch a thousand different stories bloom!
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Hi Gene 🙂
I love towers, castles and anything alike 😀 What comes in my mind regarding a tower? Most probably defense. Soldiers and knights, trying to defend a fortress or castle.
Interesting post, thank you 🙂
Hi Irene 🙂
Ah a Medievalist! Genre shows us the best use of an element within a story. So many awesome items out there to play with, the list is truly endless.
Thanks for the comment 🙂
I like how you’re taking a single concept and showing us how to brainstorm several different ideas from that. 🙂 Very cool.
Hi Jami 🙂
You’ve hit right to the heart of this series (and knowing you I would expect no less), bravo! Original material is waiting for us everywhere we look, wanting to be discovered, used and revitalized by the powerful skill sets that we as writers possess.
Thanks for the comment 😀
I guess what comes to mind are the possible histories of the building; who built it, who manned it, were there any alerts passed from there? Another interesting story-building possibility: what if no one is still alive who knows what they were for?
Hi John 🙂
“What if no one is still alive who knows what they were for?”
Excellent idea and usable across quite a few genres. Great insight!
Thanks for the comment 🙂
I love the towers and they’re very pretty ruins! I love researching certain buildings and areas before writing about them.
A great and insightful post, Gene! Thank you 🙂
There is so much in history that is still awe-inspiring to us in the modern era. I think that is the “magic” we have lost some days.
Thanks for your comment 🙂
Fascinating post! I’m so glad you popped over to Jami’s blog when I was on there as it led me to find your blog. Cool stuff here!
Great post by you as well at Jami Gold’s blog! Loved the way you put your first novel together, an excellent approach.
Thanks for the wonderful compliments and stop in anytime 🙂
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